The parallel structure and rhyme of this poem work really well. Even though the rhyme and rhythm make it seem light hearted, it has a powerful kick at the end. I almost think this should be titled something like "Wallflower" or "Shadow".
Actually, I like the name "Take a Penny". It shows the character and the structure of the poem.--Sophie
I like it because of the image it immediately creates of those little cups next to the cash register: give a penny, take a penny.
ooh i like it
The parallel structure and rhyme of this poem work really well. Even though the rhyme and rhythm make it seem light hearted, it has a powerful kick at the end. I almost think this should be titled something like "Wallflower" or "Shadow".
ReplyDeleteActually, I like the name "Take a Penny". It shows the character and the structure of the poem.
ReplyDelete--Sophie
I like it because of the image it immediately creates of those little cups next to the cash register: give a penny, take a penny.
ReplyDeleteooh i like it
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